Maldon sunrise 3

by malcolm leader

Visit to Maldon early am to photograph a sunrise over the estuary with beached boats in the foreground. Converted to B/W in PS3.
Now reworked after comments from previous image. Now much improved?
Uploaded31/03/2010 - 21:20
CategoryBlack & White
Shutter Speed1 sec
Aperturef/22
LensN/A
ISO200
Focal Length23mm
Views/Likes39/0
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wadna
Posted 31/03/2010 - 22:09 Link
The crop at the top works & improves the image IMO but you're still stuck with the FG carrying little detail. Perhaps some work on the tones of the FG to bring up a bit more detail could be worth trying.

Regards, Ian.
pauljay
Posted 01/04/2010 - 17:55 Link
Think the title needs correction to Maldon!
The lack of detail in the foreground leads the eye to the boat and then into the background. The format does it for me.
Paul.

Photography is not a sport. It has no rules. Everything must be dared and tried! (Bill Brandt)
PPG

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