New hair!
by DanielH
well what do you think of this one????
Uploaded02/06/2012 - 21:29
CategoryPortraits / People
Posted 03/06/2012 - 08:52
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This might be better without the sepia tone. As an exercise in high key photography it would have more impact in black and white with pure mono tones. As Peter says you could improve it by bringing back some detail in her hair where the highlights have blown.
David
PPG: http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/artists/davidtrout
David
PPG: http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/artists/davidtrout
Posted 03/06/2012 - 09:59
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Agree with Peter and David - basically a nice portrait that is just not quite there. For me not quite enough detail or contrast and the left edge - particularly top left corner are too bright and distracting - but it is close to being very nice indeed
Carl
Carl
No matter how many lenses I have owned - I have always needed just one more
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