Fender Stratocaster

You did a good job, it's nicely lit. I also own a Strat, flash highlights can be a problem because of the shiny body and chromed parts.
That said mines over 50 years old so there's not a lot of shine left!

I used an on camera flash for these pictures and it shows,
http://www.russv.me.uk/html/guitar.html

I like this a lot