young couple 2

by conexus

played with this one
Uploaded06/06/2009 - 12:07
CategoryPortraits / People
Shutter Speed1/125
Focal Length42.5mm

Posted 06/06/2009 - 12:18 Link
Well Ime still very much a noob and not very good with portraits but heres my 2 cents...

1) I dont like the 2 black corneres in the upper corners, ide erase them.
2) I like what you have done with the guy. I think the B+W works well for him.
3)I dont know what you have done to the girl but theres a few flaws, she has a "orange" cheek (from flash or color adjustments??)
And also she has "patches" missing (right shoulder, forehead, hair etc)
Ime guessing this is from you trying to reduce noise or something?

If you re-do the girl (pardon the expression) I think you will have a nice shot with good composure maby bring the guy down a tad to?

Keep at it!
Lil Andy

K20D, PENTAX DA 18-55, TAMRON DI 70-300, PENTAX SMC-K 135 f2.5
Posted 06/06/2009 - 16:37 Link
Looks very manipulated to the point it could have just been cut out in photoshop and then plonked onto a white background. Just doesnt look at all natural.
Edited by Cloudhunter: 06/06/2009 - 16:37

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