A Pattern of Walls

A very engaging, graphic pattern/image, Andrew.

May I suggest:

exclude the sea but retain the top coping;

enhance the shadow detail a little;

straighten, clockwise, slightly.

Please forgive the pickiness!

Roger.

The more I look, the more there is to see!

bwlchmawr

Member

13 years
Somerset

Link Posted 15/05/2012 - 19:10

Thanks for the suggestions, Roger. Much appreciated and all valid.

Best wishes,

Andrew

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GIULIO57

Member

14 years
Firenze-Italia

Link Posted 15/05/2012 - 19:22

Great BW and subject.

PPG

Northgrain

Member

12 years
Glossop, UK

Link Posted 15/05/2012 - 19:44

Great spot of an interesting image.

Tim

Some of my vaguely better stuff

Dai_Bach

Member

10 years
West Midlands

Link Posted 15/05/2012 - 21:15

Very nice, Andrew, I would love to see this as a paper print; is Minor White an influence on your photography?

Regards,

David

bwlchmawr

Member

13 years
Somerset

Link Posted 16/05/2012 - 09:09

Dai_Bach wrote:
Very nice, Andrew, I would love to see this as a paper print; is Minor White an influence on your photography?

Regards,

David

Thanks everyone.
I'm ashamed to say I've never heard of Minor White, David, but I'll do some research...

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