Raminta
by Mal
I would have placed the flash on left side of the camera and then her cheekbone would have made a shadow on her face and her face would have looked much narrower.
I like this shot.
I'll leave the technical suggestions to those with more experience,
but to me, you've got a great little model in a relaxed pose, and I hope to see more.
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Regards
Mal
My intension was the constructive criticism. I hope you didn't feel my words hurtful.
I hope you didn't feel my words hurtful.
Not at all , I'm very new to flash photography so any advice is greatly appreciated .
Regards
Mal
A little cropping could really rescue this shot!
:Thanks for the advice , but i don't like square portraits , just got to get my framing right next time , i was using a MF lens on this one and was concentrating on focus rather than getting the framing right.
Regards
Mal
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