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My first effort with flash. i have lots to learn but liked this image. I will upload the colour version tomorrow. Constructive feedback appreciated.

Thanks

Fletcher8
27/01/2011 - 12:53Fletcher8
CategoryPortraits / People
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thoughton

Link Posted 27/01/2011 - 13:24
Looks pretty damn good to me! Nice BW conversion, nice and sharp. Personally I might crop in a little tighter off the right and bottom.
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GIULIO57

Link Posted 27/01/2011 - 16:20
Good BW. Tim is right. crop right. Perfect use of flash
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bwlchmawr

Link Posted 27/01/2011 - 16:35
Yep, lovely pose, light and expression, but Tim's right. You need to focus our attention on her more...
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sandinista

Link Posted 27/01/2011 - 18:16
Top notch image, I agree with my friends above, well taken and posed
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pauljay

Link Posted 28/01/2011 - 18:16
Cropping is all very well but it takes away the surrounds and isolates the subject from the environment. I think the vignette has done the job more than sufficiently on this occasion.
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bonnipics

Link Posted 28/01/2011 - 22:11
Anyhow! It'S a good pic sometimes we get to deep and miss the purpose of the shot... FWIW I like it regards Ron
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vikma19

Link Posted 30/01/2011 - 16:53
Surprising, magnificent photo

B.R. Viktor
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