Contemplation


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cropping needed? couldnt decide i like it like this
04/07/2011 - 21:03DanielH
CategoryPortraits / People
Shutter Speed1/400
Aperturef/8
LensN/A
ISO400
Focal Length300mm
Views/Likes45/0
AxelLuther
Posted 04/07/2011 - 21:36 Link
hmmm depends on what you want to put your focus on - the cheeky pose or the overall nice scene - decentralizing her a bit I would at least suggest - but the image itself has a great atmosphere already as it is....
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davidstorm
Posted 04/07/2011 - 22:47 Link
Don't crop it - the loose composition makes the picture. No matter how far you crop this, there's only one place everyone will look!
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Nicola's Apartments, Kassiopi, Corfu

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GIULIO57
Posted 05/07/2011 - 08:14 Link
Your contemplation of her legs!Crop the right so to give her eyes more space on the left where she's looking at.(R or L from my the observer)
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Edited by GIULIO57: 05/07/2011 - 08:34
davidstorm
Posted 05/07/2011 - 23:35 Link
Not sure about the crop to the right - I like the empty space on the park bench. Maybe just a small crop?
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Nicola's Apartments, Kassiopi, Corfu

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