Melissa

Alistair, the eye contact in this portrait is very good, but there is no space for the chin to breath. Had you left space for her chin, this would have been a far better image in my opinion.

Did she tell you why she was in Belfast?

Fletcher8.

Last Edited by Fletcher8 on 29/03/2014 - 06:02

bwlchmawr

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Somerset

Link Posted 29/03/2014 - 06:31

A lovely natural portrait with good skin tones.

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Hardgravity

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Bradford,Yorkshire, UK

Link Posted 29/03/2014 - 11:12

A horizontal crop with just the eyes would work very well with this image, lovely lass that she is

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Mac

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Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Link Posted 29/03/2014 - 14:00

Hardgravity wrote:
A horizontal crop with just the eyes would work very well with this image, lovely lass that she is

Agree, would balance the chin crop nicely.

Or post the shot from your web site?

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Last Edited by Mac on 29/03/2014 - 14:02

Teaka53

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9 years
Norfolk UK

Link Posted 30/03/2014 - 18:59

Great portrait

Malc

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Link Posted 02/04/2014 - 18:38

Thanks

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