Maldon sunrise 3

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Visit to Maldon early am to photograph a sunrise over the estuary with beached boats in the foreground. Converted to B/W in PS3.
Now reworked after comments from previous image. Now much improved?

31/03/2010 - 21:20malcolm leader

CategoryBlack & White

BodyPENTAX K10D

Shutter Speed1 sec

Aperturef/22

LensN/A

ISO200

Focal Length23mm

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wadna

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14 years
Nimbin, Australia

Link Posted 31/03/2010 - 22:09

The crop at the top works & improves the image IMO but you're still stuck with the FG carrying little detail. Perhaps some work on the tones of the FG to bring up a bit more detail could be worth trying.

Regards, Ian.

pauljay

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14 years
Zuid Limburg, The Netherlands

Link Posted 01/04/2010 - 17:55

Think the title needs correction to Maldon!
The lack of detail in the foreground leads the eye to the boat and then into the background. The format does it for me.

Paul.

Photography is not a sport. It has no rules. Everything must be dared and tried! (Bill Brandt)
PPG

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Camera Make:	PENTAX Corporation
Camera Model:	PENTAX K10D
Date Taken:	2010-03-28 05:56:22
Exposure Program:	Aperture priority
Aperture:	f/22
Max Aperture Value:	N/A
ISO Speed Rating:	200
Focal Length:	23 mm
Lens:	N/A
Metering Mode:	Pattern/Matrix
Exposure Time:	1. sec