Hawthorn

I can see why you framed as you have but I would have been inclined to try framing slightly to three right place the bush firmly in the BL corner allowing those jet streams just a bit more leading line space.
It's a workmanlike photo but lacks that little extra that would make it a real eye-catcher.

Regards, Ian.

bwlchmawr

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Somerset

Link Posted 14/03/2010 - 21:33

Thanks Ian,

Excellent points I guess I was trying to make use of the stones and small scrubby thing to balance the con-trails. But this was a bad day to post this "workmanlike" photo when there's that superb shot of Paul's which is in a different league.

Best wishes,

Andrew

Best wishes,

Andrew

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