They all Grow Up!

by VonBatCat

My little Niece this christmas, not so little anymore.
Uploaded06/01/2011 - 17:50
CategoryPortraits / People
Shutter Speed1/125
Aperturef/4
LensN/A
ISO800
Focal Length58mm
Views/Likes98/0

bwlchmawr
Posted 06/01/2011 - 21:15 Link
Pretty girl and very good pose, but I feel the highlights are too far gone for my tastes; others will undoubtably feel differently.
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pauljay
Posted 07/01/2011 - 04:37 Link
Tend to agree with Andrew on that one. Toned down a little, and perhaps with a small crop, it'll look great.
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GIULIO57
Posted 07/01/2011 - 09:02 Link
Wonderful photo and girl...in this case I've no personal opinion about highlights areas onto the face of the girl...I appreciate this portrait as it is
PPG
thoughton
Posted 07/01/2011 - 10:33 Link
Nice photo of a pretty girl. As others have noted the face is quite bright, she could pass for a Geisha
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jeff0000
Posted 07/01/2011 - 11:23 Link
Nice photo
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VonBatCat
Posted 07/01/2011 - 13:17 Link
bwlchmawr wrote:
Pretty girl and very good pose, but I feel the highlights are too far gone for my tastes; others will undoubtably feel differently.

Quite agree have viewed it on a better monitor than the laptop where I produced it. Toned it down and it looks alot better. Many Thanks.
The pose is due to the amazingly large chocolate fudge cake she was just about to demolish.
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Mac
Posted 12/01/2011 - 22:40 Link
I like the crop.
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timbo
Posted 18/01/2011 - 21:08 Link
Lovely portrait, but I feel that the right hand 1/3 of the image is wasted, so could be cropped out, and maybe a little more space in front of her, and also crop the bottom to lose that bit of arm showing in the bottom left of the image, so that everything then concentrates on her lovely face.

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