Daffodil
by CIBarker
I've had another go with off camera flash x 2 increased DoF and lower ISO, but I don't like the result, I'll add to my portfolio maybe you could let me know where I'm going wrong.
Best Regards
Chris
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12 years
Sheffield,
England
- I think the flower needs a little more space around it, not too much but it looks a little tight to the edges
- try it with a narrower aperture to get more depth of field and keep the stem in focus (F16 to F22?)
- Reduce the ISO to 100 or 200; if it's on a tripod, this won't be an issue
It would be nice to know how you lit the image. If it was lit head on, try it from the side and if you can use two light sources rather than one, all the better.
Hope this is useful.
Regards
David
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