Boy and pig


Photo Information
This should be in portrait but was my first rather hurried attempt at such a shot.
Uncropped and little pp.
Any comments/advice as to how I could improve it would be welcome!
13/08/2011 - 14:49Blaze
CategoryBlack & White
Shutter Speed1/500
Aperturef/5
LensN/A
ISO400
Focal Length55mm
Views/Likes129/0
Tagsboy, pig, farm

bwlchmawr

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 17:47
It'sa an outstanding portrait. It needs, in my opinion, a square crop, the untidy right hand edge does the shot few favours. If you've shot in RAW, you could regain some highlights in the stones surrounding the door.
Best wishes,

Andrew

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Blaze

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 17:49
No, it as jpeg - it was pure chance I saw them standing there and just snapped.
I'll go back to the original and try a square crop.

puma

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 18:10
Splendid image
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womble

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 18:30
A square crop might work well. It is a lovely image.

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sandinista

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 18:30
Excellent shot and even more so for an impromptue one. You have great tones and contrast but a square crop would be better as Andrew says. You could try burning a litle detail into the stone, but go easy with it.
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bwlchmawr

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 18:43
You "just snapped"...mmm.
What might you do with more time and consideration?
Best wishes,

Andrew

"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference.  All of them can record what you are seeing.  But, you have to SEE."
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DrOrloff

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 18:58
As you know I think this is an outstanding capture. Luckily I have seen the unprocessed original and the final version should be something a bit special.
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Blaze

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 19:36
I'm absolutely overwhelmed by the response to my photo.
DrOrloff has seen my attempts to improve since I bought the Kx in April and it's been a long haul.
I believe that so much in shots of people or animals is the luck in capturing that moment. I just wish I'd had time to perhaps zoom out a little, and perhaps make it a portrait shot. At least zooming out would have given more options for cropping.

It's certainly inspired me to have another go - thanks everyone

autumnlight

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 20:28
I think this shot is wonderful, i agree with the other's about the crop, i'm certainly no expert, but the b/w of the child and the pig is spot on, i love it.
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Dilek

Link Posted 13/08/2011 - 23:56
autumnlight wrote:
I think this shot is wonderful, i agree with the other's about the crop, i'm certainly no expert, but the b/w of the child and the pig is spot on, i love it.

I'm only a beginner my self, but i do agree with the overstanding comments...
With kind regards,

senn

Link Posted 14/08/2011 - 07:39
It sounds so natural to me, .. maybe you can keep it as it is; .. details with pig are stunning
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GIULIO57

Link Posted 14/08/2011 - 10:40
In style Paul Strand.
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Blaze

Link Posted 14/08/2011 - 10:54
I've just looked up Paul Strand - what a great photographer and atmospheric photos. Interesting landscapes too.
Thank you, Guilio57

Charlotte

Link Posted 14/08/2011 - 17:47
Fantastic picture Blaze,

Can't wait to see more of your work.
Kind regards
Charlotte
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Blaze

Link Posted 14/08/2011 - 18:21
Hang on there, Charlotte, I've only just started !!!
But thanks

davidtrout

Link Posted 15/08/2011 - 08:49
Excellent image, its got humour as well as the aaah factor.
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szgabor

Link Posted 15/08/2011 - 21:20
Lovely shot, the boy's expression is great. Nice first upload to the PUG, welcome.
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PENTAX1244

Link Posted 16/08/2011 - 11:49
It's often the case a grab shot works best, agree needs areas to left and right need cropping to square format, well seen and taken,lovely image.Works in B&W.
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nonur

Link Posted 13/10/2011 - 08:29
It will be enough for me to say that I love it!
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davidstorm

Link Posted 13/10/2011 - 20:15
Only just seen this one - missed it earlier. Wow! What a fantastic portrait!! One of the best I've seen on the Gallery.

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Blaze

Link Posted 13/10/2011 - 21:18
Thank you very much! It really was one of those lucky shots!
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