Coal Tramway

Coal Tramway

by grahamwalton

Taken at the Black Country Museum.
Pentax K20 with Pentax DA* 50-135.
ISO 400.
Uploaded31/01/2010 - 21:19
CategoryBlack & White
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timbo
Posted 31/01/2010 - 21:31 Link
Graham.

I can't quite make my mind up whether I like it or not.

I like the lines and the patterns, and the missing brick, but my eye is led straight out of the image without settling on anything.
alfpics
Posted 01/02/2010 - 08:49 Link
I sort of agree with timbo. Its the sort of shot I would go for myself, though. Wonder if it would have worked better in portrait format?
Andy
Andy
grahamwalton
Posted 02/02/2010 - 17:23 Link
Thanks for your honest opinions, Tim and Andy, they are most appreciated. I personally like it, but we will have to see how this one goes.
Friendly Regards
Graham
wadna
Posted 25/03/2010 - 20:12 Link
Nice & simple, my sort of photo.
I think you should flip this top to bottom so the tracks lead our eyes to the textures of the bricks.
At the same time you could flip it left to right so the tracks start in the BL.

Regards, Ian.
Edited by wadna: 25/03/2010 - 20:12

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