Cloud City #2 / The Passenger #1

by kasperbergholt

Another photo showing a section of one of the two Kaktus Tower buildings in the left-hand side of the photo.
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Also see: Third photo with a vintage Pentax K10D.
Uploaded12/09/2024 - 17:29
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rick
Posted 12/09/2024 - 17:56 Link
Superb photo, nice inclusion of the person to highlight scale and purpose
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Flan
Posted 12/09/2024 - 19:50 Link
Nice feel to it, the focus where the leading lines brings one too.
The cloud on the left distracts IMHO
Minimalism if that fluffy edge was cloned out.
davidwozhere
Posted 12/09/2024 - 22:21 Link
Yes, the fluffy edge needs to go but that black and white has IMPACT!
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Posted 13/09/2024 - 08:03 Link
Good NOIR stuff! Keep at it.
Edited by Grodgeman: 13/09/2024 - 08:03
kasperbergholt
Posted 13/09/2024 - 09:09 Link
Thank you for the feedback, it's appreciated

Here's the original uncropped version.

I see the logic behind cropping tighter and/or editing out the cloud to the right.

On the other hand, I like the sense of non perfection it adds to the photo.
-- Kasper Bergholt
Edited by kasperbergholt: 13/09/2024 - 09:10
LennyBloke
Posted 13/09/2024 - 10:54 Link
There are some photos that we aim for "perfection" in, generally we don't quite achieve it but they help build our experience and improve our technique.

The non perfection that you have mentioned in this image really makes for a superb photograph - it doesn't conform to many traditional rules, but has good impact and a great look
LennyBloke
Flan
Posted 13/09/2024 - 20:53 Link
I meant too add, that it is a superb photograph.
Spad
Posted 14/09/2024 - 13:30 Link
I smegging love this....

They way you spotted and captured the highlights is nothing short of brilliant. Then throw in all the contrasts, make this photo just epic.

For me this a POTW contender!!
The Legendary Terry Pratchett once said:
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kasperbergholt
Posted 14/09/2024 - 14:09 Link
LennyBloke wrote:
There are some photos that we aim for "perfection" in, generally we don't quite achieve it but they help build our experience and improve our technique.

The non perfection that you have mentioned in this image really makes for a superb photograph - it doesn't conform to many traditional rules, but has good impact and a great look

Well put

It struck me that there might also be something at play in terms of the number of elements / sections being either odd or even numbered.

I count 6 without the cloudy area and 7 with it, highly subjective.
-- Kasper Bergholt
leep
Posted 16/09/2024 - 13:30 Link
Worthy of display in an exhibition.
Quality shot for sure. Super
kasperbergholt
Posted 17/09/2024 - 09:33 Link
Spad wrote:
I smegging love this....

They way you spotted and captured the highlights is nothing short of brilliant. Then throw in all the contrasts, make this photo just epic.

For me this a POTW contender!!

Thank you

I went to the same place yesterday - with a 35mm macro limited this time. Haven't had a look at the results yet, but it'd be an interesting project shooting a couple of times, perhaps with different lenses.
-- Kasper Bergholt
kasperbergholt
Posted 17/09/2024 - 09:33 Link
leep wrote:
Worthy of display in an exhibition.
Quality shot for sure. Super

Thanks
-- Kasper Bergholt
pauljay
Posted 24/09/2024 - 09:47 Link
It's a super shot! Without the cumulus it becomes super super!
Paul.

Photography is not a sport. It has no rules. Everything must be dared and tried! (Bill Brandt)
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Edited by pauljay: 24/09/2024 - 09:47

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