"Make-Up" before the wedding
2. I'm not keen on the soft focus look and the bags under the eyes.
3. I think I would rather the focus on the bride and not the bridesmaids(?). The lady who is centre of attention could do with some work to her face to remove the blotchy look she has and lit her face a bit more evenly.
4. I'd smooth the skin a little, not a lot but some frequency separation would work wonders here. Her forehead for example is showing up all her skins imperfections.
5. Same as the above but I'd patch tool out the OOF areas in the background.
6. Love the black and black look and the girl is perfect in the frame. Again I'm not keen on the soft focus look (clarity slider turned down?) as mums skin has gone very blotchy and looks zombie like.
Did you get any of No.6 with mum looking towards you? If she would have dropped her chin onto the daughter then it'd been a magical shot.
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