In the Jungle of the nigh


Aiki

Link Posted 15/01/2010 - 19:32
Again some CC please

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2.




couple of more
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Oggy

Link Posted 15/01/2010 - 21:25
If you really want criticism Aiki, you have mistyped the title.

Aiki

Link Posted 15/01/2010 - 21:36

Thanks, Oggy.
Luckily it is ok on the photos, isn't it
cant edit it any more

I was told that maybe some trees of nr 1 should be cropped out from left ?

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alun

Link Posted 15/01/2010 - 21:48
Aiki, the first image has an element of surreality which appeals to me.
I think would have cropped some of the light on the right, back to the trees.
Where did the pink light in the centre mid/distance come from?

RR

Link Posted 15/01/2010 - 21:54
Aiki, I hope you don't mind but here's my edit. As I suggested, I've lost the trees on the left but this gave an uneven composition too, so as it happens I've also cropped the right as alun suggested.

A touch of contrast & white neutralised but I fear I have lost the atmosphere of the original.



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hefty1

Link Posted 15/01/2010 - 22:28
I love the first one Aiki!

I quite like your original composition but I think I slightly prefer RR's crop. Not so keen on his change of colour though - the cast on your original was just perfect, magical even.

With the second picture I really like the colours again but I don't think there's any central point to hold my attention - it's a little too "busy" for my taste.

You should really do a print of the first one, it'd look great hanging on a wall.
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Lee171167

Link Posted 16/01/2010 - 11:13
Aiki,

I also think they are great!

Lee
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jackitec

Link Posted 16/01/2010 - 13:22
Nice photos Aiki, I gave no.1 a little lift, one click photo fix in Paint Shop Pro, would make a nice Xmas card.

Jack.


Prieni

Link Posted 16/01/2010 - 13:34
Second one is nice enough, but same as hefty1, nothing to lead your attention to.
RR's crop is fab, even though I liked the first pic as is, when I saw RR's crop it got a little wow from me. I would keep the colours though.

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Aiki

Link Posted 16/01/2010 - 14:18
Thank you, everybody !

Yes, I do mind, RR ! That I was hoping you to do
Now I understand what you ment. Thanks.
The colors are on your pic great too. Just two different views I must say, your version is not a night shot any more But great anyway.

About the pink color:
Two of the streetlamps are a bit wierd there
The pic nr 2 is taken on the same place as nr 1. Just over the (car)road next to the footpath.

About the second. Can sth be done?
Is there some use of a severe crop ?



Feel free about showing me ! That is what I expect actually
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hefty1

Link Posted 17/01/2010 - 01:31
I can't see any crop that would really make the second one work for me - sorry Aiki, it's certainly pretty (those colours again!) but it doesn't tell a story like the first one does.
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