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Goth LAdy

Don
Posted 15/09/2013 - 14:04 Link
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C&C welcome..

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Pentaxophile
Posted 15/09/2013 - 19:14 Link
Expertly lit, but for me you have gilded the lily twice over - first with the face-smoothing which leaves her with little skin texture, and second on the framing effect. Sorry Don! It shows great skill, way beyond what I could do, but nevertheless I don't think it quite works.
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tyronet2000
Posted 15/09/2013 - 19:25 Link
Looks like something made of plastic, sorry.
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cabstar
Posted 15/09/2013 - 19:56 Link
I like it but dont think it needs the square frame.
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DrOrloff
Posted 15/09/2013 - 20:56 Link
It is very weird, a gothic futuristic mashup. 19th century meets 23rd century. The extreme smoothing leaves a very ambiguous feel, is the subject real or not? And those contradictions are I think the strengths of this image and the reason I keep popping back for another look.
Pentaxophile
Posted 15/09/2013 - 22:28 Link
Actually you could be onto something there Doctor O.

The image unsettles me, but if that was the intention, it's a success!
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Edited by Pentaxophile: 15/09/2013 - 22:32
Don
Posted 15/09/2013 - 22:59 Link
a deliberate effort to blur the line between painting and photograph, with goth vibes....
I appreciate the feedback. thanks!
Fired many shots. Didn't kill anything.
johnriley
Posted 15/09/2013 - 23:13 Link
Fantastic - bold and different!
Best regards, John
Don
Posted 16/09/2013 - 14:17 Link
cardiff_gareth wrote:
She looks like a porcelain doll!! Look out Vogue!!

I was actually contemplating turning the skin tones wayy down to near white to completely get a doll like look, but I have a strong tendency to use warm tones... it was a tough choice but I opted for something I think she'd like more.

I appreciate all the C&C guys. thank you....
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MarcParty
Posted 16/09/2013 - 21:28 Link
She looks more like geisha than goth
Nicely lit though
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Edited by MarcParty: 16/09/2013 - 21:29

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