Bleach Green Viaduct as seen by K70 and 11-18mm lens


Antony

Link Posted 27/02/2020 - 21:07
I'm on a hunt to find bridges for the next meeting of my local U3A group!
The photos were exposure bracketed and processed in Lightroom.














davidwozhere

Link Posted 28/02/2020 - 01:52
2nd one for me, although that location is full of potential.
Both the *istDS and the K5 are incurably addicted to old glass

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Nigelk

Link Posted 28/02/2020 - 08:04
All interesting but agree with davidwozhere, No.2 really works as a composition.
I hope you are enjoying your new 11-18mm, I think it's a mighty fine lens

LennyBloke

Link Posted 28/02/2020 - 10:54
Nice little set - and another vote for no.2 - a little more detail pulled out of the foreground might give it some extra punch?
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Sry

Link Posted 28/02/2020 - 11:19
Great potential here indeed - I can see plenty of things to try from the perspective of #1. 2 works best for me also, though.

Antony

Link Posted 28/02/2020 - 19:04
Thanks for all the nice comments.
LennyBloke, you suggested a bit more foreground detail - I'd left it dark with the idea that it's going from dark to light; I've now lightened it and, yes, you're probably right! I suppose it often depends on what one wants to portray.
Here it is, shadows and clarity sliders to the right, white clipping slightly down -


davidwozhere

Link Posted 29/02/2020 - 01:43
For me, the drama is in the white concrete which is emphasized in the original shot. The new one, with lightened foreground is all of a similar tone and lacks that drama.
Both the *istDS and the K5 are incurably addicted to old glass

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