A Glimpse in the Drinks Cabinet
I really like your original version posted in the Gallery. I think that the lighting across the whole image worked more effectively in that version. With this one, the vignette doesn't work for my eye and looks more like unwanted noise. Maybe a simple OOF & de-saturated vignette might be a more effective variation.
w.r.t. your original post - the only area where I have a (very) slight misgiving is the multi coloured strand of light above the handle on the right - I think I would be tempted to clone that out to match the uniform blue background of the remainder of the image.
Phil
K-5iiS; K-r; ME Super; ME; DA* 16-50 f2.8; DA 18-135 WR; DA 55-300 WR; HD DA 15mm F4 ED AL Limited; FA 50mm f1.4; A50mm f1.7; DAL 18-55mm; M40mm f2.8; + assorted non-Pentax lenses
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David
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davidstorm
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Sheffield, England
Photographic equipment used was a K-5iis, DA*50-135 at F2.8, a Tripod and a Reflector.
All comments welcomed as usual.
Regards
David
PS: Forgot to mention it's also had a warming filter applied to the monochrome areas.
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Nicola's Apartments, Kassiopi, Corfu
Some cameras, some lenses, some bits 'n' bobs